Eclipse deck advice

is this eclipse deck good?

Starter: amber dragon dawn

G0: 16
8 stand
4 crit
4 heal

G1: 14
4 amber dragon daylight
4 bahr
3 kimnara
3 bari


G2: 12
4 amber dragon dusk
4 nehalem
4 lava arm dragon

G3: 7
4 amber dragon eclipse
3 dragonic waterfowl

Amber decks are generally meh.... because amber's effect is kind of substandard. Also, all 7 of your g3 requires them to be in the VG circle to be effective. I generally put 4 VG g3 and 3-4 g3 that i will normally use in the rearguard. Just my personal choice though.

Like what cards in d rg circle?

Normally when i play, I'll normally have a g3 in the rearguard, such as dual axe archdragon/Palo/ Forerunner battlemaiden, Laurel, who can also work in the vanguard circle as well as the rearguard.

Having Waterfowl and eclipse obviously will limit your options, since they are as good as a g2 10k in the rearguard circle, or even worse, since they can't even guard. Maybe removing 2 eclipse , OR all 3 of the waterfowls and consider other G3 such as DO ?

Instead of waterfowl, i prefer using executioner.
use conroe as first vanguard, it is more useful than dawn.
Bellicosity Dragon as well....
also you can choose heatnail salamander than kimnara since this deck use lots of counter blast

Too many Dusk. 2 is enough