Please Give Me Some Comments!!!! Tyvm!!

TELE-DAD+TELE-ZOMBIE DECK

Monsters
1x Dark Armed Dragon
1x Tragoedia
1x Gorz,The Emissary Of Darkness
1x Plaguespreader Zombie
1x Elemental Hero Stratos
1x Destiny Hero-Diamond Dude
1x Spirit Reaper
1x Destiny Hero-Fear monger
1x Blackwing-Gale The Whirlwind
1x Psychic Commander
1x Cyber Dragon
1x Sangan
1x Dark Grepher
2x Mystic Tomato
2x Krebon
2x Destiny Hero-Malicious
2x Caius,The Shadow Monarch

Spells
1x Allure Of Darkness
1x Dark Hole
1x Book Of Moon
1x Fissure
1x Lightning Voltex
1x Emergency Teleport
1x Giant Trunade
1x Reinforcement Of The Army
1x Mind Control
1x Destiny Draw
2x Mystical Space Typhoon

Trap
1x Solemn Judgement
1x Phoenix Wing Wind Blast
1x Dimensional Prison
1x Return From Different Dimension
1x Bottomless Trap Hole
1x Call Of The Haunted
1x Torrential Tribute
1x Mirror Force

Synchron
1x Aoj Catastor
1x Red dragon Archfiend
1x Ancient Fairy Dragon
1x Gaia Knight,The Force Of Earth
1x Magical Andriod
1x Goyo Guardian
1x Mist Worm(still considering whether to add it)
1x Blackrose Dragon(still considering whether to add it)
2x Stardust Dragon
2x Thought Ruler Archfiend
3x Colossal Fighter

Side Deck
1x Necro Gardna
1x Zombie Master
1x Book Of Life(maybe getting 2)
1x Mezuki
1x Morphing Jar
2x Goblin Zombie



HAVE A LOOK AT MY DECK AND OF COURSE, MOST IMPORTANTLY PLEASE GIVE SUGGESTIONS FOR MY DECK TOO!! THANK YOU.

- 1 Destiny Hero-Diamond Dude
- 1 Ehero Stratos
- 1 Destiny Hero-Fear monger
- 1 Destiny Draw
- 1 Return From Different Dimension

+ 1 Monster Reborn
+ 1 Book of Moon
+ 2 Chaos Sorcerer
+ 1 Call of The Haunted

You don't need D-heroes just for D-Draw , D-Draw is just at one and it would only be used once . Try this build instead : )

well, there are alot of ways to do an otk, and sadly, the era of tele dad is over. i know its sad, i had 3 diabolics and 2 ddbs. i know, life was good then. well if you REALLY wanna do zombies you could play the plant variant of zombies. i saw it in action last saturday, must say it works pretty ok. by pretty ok i mean, competitive standard. might wanna think about changing your deck type,while preserving the main idea. cheers!

Thanks for the ideas

the days are over but still can play but slow...

since ur deck revolves round oop,grave,perhaps run dark creator or the end spirits would be a good choice