remove the bribe, add another solemn. i dont really like to let my opponent draw a card. when black whirlwind is out, be sure to replace raptor wing strike with it.
-dark bribe
-raptor wing (actually u dont really need it now)
-lightning vortex
-burial from d.d. (limited choices for returning to grave)
+2 book of moon
+2 mind control
some other suggestions:
maybe u can add 3 x gravekeeper's spy and 1 x gravekeeper's guard like how the new jap bfs have been doing to abuse arcanite magician . it helps in mirror matches too. if u do add gravekeeper stuff, u can remove stuff such as
-2 x necro garna
-1 x morphing jar
-1 x d.d crow
just my suggestion